was odd... but redeemed at the end!

your art has improved! or at least changed somewhat

Apart from repeating the praises I've been doing the past few episodes, I wanted to say how much your English is improving. There are a couple of mistakes here and there, but both spelling and grammar have jumped a HUGE amount since even the last few episodes! Koodos

Hey, guess I got two to go (Lucky me!!!)

Ok, Well, I forgot to mention a few things in the last episode that I also noticed in this episode...

First, I wanted to mention that I noticed a subtle, and sometimes not so subtle difference in facial animations between the pussy and ass sex scenes of each pussymon. In some, you have ecstasy, but in others, you might have slightly less joy, pain, or confusion, which does add a bit of personality to each pussymon, letting us know what their preference is, or even if they have one.
Also, the descriptions of each pussymon are really well written. I can see how much you care about this series in the little details like that.
Awesome touches!

As for gameplay issues, I noticed that the description for the sidequests in this and all the prior episodes are meant to say that the quest is not available and when it is until the quest is opened. However, The text line goes:
"Quest Log [00/01]: Not yet available, check the quest log later. (This side quest will unlock after you reach" cutting off before the hint.
I would like to suggest that Quest Logs be given two lines of text so that the hint can be given (This also happens when you're informing us when we can replay a completed quest.)
You can also abbreviate "Not yet available" to "N/A" which is the short form of it.

Looking forward to the next one

WOAH! I thought Adette was the witch! I'm literally shocked! But her mask does look like one of Muwilight, if I am not mistaken...

As for the story, I like the twists you are putting in the game, the story aspect is well developed and the characters are well rounded.

I have a few theorizing questions about what's to come, but I think I will keep them to myself this time.

Gameplay mechanics are awesome, I found the drop rates slightly on the care token side, but not too harshly this time, giving me plenty of train tokens to work with. I think that, if you're getting a lot of flack about it, you could have Lily be a mechanic to trade care tokens for training tokens and training tokens for caring tokens, but that's totally up to you.

The issue I found with the previous episodes, evolving a pussymon and having a glitch where either the evolved version or the second catch at the unevolved pussymon doesn't register one of the care tokens you give the first time is gone now, so I'm happy that's fixed.

I also found the balancing in both the enemy strength vs your own offensive strength and the cash flow (how much you need vs how much you earn) to be perfect as well, leaving me with no grinding for anything but tokens.

Sorry, you did such a great job, I'm really not able to give any suggestions to improve anything really, from artstyle to story to gameplay, this was quite enjoyable and I look forward to the next episode...

really well done

call it 4.9 stars... she needs a crown