dragonflamesmedia's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Fox and Wolf]

Pretty good however I find a few things strange about this (looking at it in a critiquoral perspective):
1. the coloration, ears and thick mussle of the wolf makes me think he's a wild dog more than a fat wolf. sorry to say.
2. There's got to be a backstory why such a capable fox is teamed up with what seams to be such a selfish and dependant wolf
3. There should be more ear play, sneaking into the door, the fox and wolf would curl their ears back, in order to protect them, same as when the fox is pushing the wolf.
4. This is minor but you could use more realistic sound effects. I think the best way is to use the mike feature on your phone and act out the sounds... like walking on a bord, rather than knocking on one.

[Cooking with Gandalf]

I think you had enough lip talk for a while, so I am going to talk about story and what I like lol I loved it. Lamb-wize Ham-G was a little lame and so was "You shall not pastaIt Those were orchastrated, forced jokes. But they gay humor, giving Gandalf's actor's prefferance was quite fitting. and the expression on the fish was priceless. However, I wouldn't have puckered the fish up into lips like you did. it looked like Golom had a fish fettish until the end, and that ruined the Gandalf gay jokes. I'm sorry I am trying to stay positive, but some things bugg me. The fish in terror look is still making me laugh though, so 5 stars for the fish!

[TOME: Nylocke's Day Off]

this is a great story from a great storyline. however I think you overplayed the drawings, loosing their meaning slightly. Sorry

[The Monster]

wow. ok:
Storyline:Your story is pretty good, I don't know how she survived the attack without using her power, but that's minor, it could be a bonus with her power. Anyways... The story was clear and flowed evenly and well.

Character design: your characters are well drawn out. I quite enjoyed how the straw man looked a little like Loofy from One Piece and your character sort of looked like a misfit hero/ misunderstood badguy.

Sound: I would have loved to hear voices in this video, but you did get a good choice of music, at any rate.

All in all, I have nothing really to say against your video and furthermore, I look forward to watching your Other Side movies.

exninja123 responds:

thanks!
glad you enjoyed it! :D

[Werebox the movie]

You have a lot of guts putting this kinda "true story" genre movie out. Newgrounds seems to be overrun with comedies supported with cute movies, parofies and one or two dramas, so I can see how other might not get where you are comming from.

But this is awesome. It also let us know where you are comming from. Oh and upload Max Ball cause I want to play it!!!!

[Team Fortress 2 Fail]

this was a decent video. didn't play the game but still a decent video, and I like the after credits feature.

[Scare]

your animation is a little lacking in the sence that it runs slow (story vs, timing, not animation speed) and you don't have much to go by. this is a good start though, I can see a lot of potential in your story. In my opinion, use long pauses (like done with the naming of the sword) to build up suspence before or after a fight. Use really fast motions durring the fight and slightly faster motions durring the peaceful times. I walk down a street faster than Scare does, which makes it drawn out rather than captivating. Also, keep consistancy.. if he has a hand without an arm, still use his hand to grasp the sword. How the blade appeared when you named the sword, his fingertips would be showing and the bottom of his palm too, showing that he has a hand.

But this could all just be me. It's a compelling story all in all and I hope you keep it up.

LefyBoy responds:

I appreciate your review and I will definitely take your points, good ones mind you, into consideration when creating the next episode.

[bunnies.]

I told myself it would be funny if it was something like that.. but the way you did it was better than I thought of myself. Congrats! Instant replay

[Paraphernalia]

so cute. I really enjoyed this

[Pleasure Island 3]

I love the story and especially the poem at the end