I haven't had the chance to see the first one, so judging that it's a sequal, I totally will go and view the first one now.
As for this video on it's own.......
Your story: Awesome
Timing: Great!
Audio..... well sorry to say but some of your voices seemed lower than the music, especially when wispering, but other than that, awesome!
All in all, 5 stars and a 5 rating!